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Graveminder & muttering on craft/process

  • Oct. 9th, 2009 at 12:54 AM

< start pondering >

I've written 5 novels (1 trunk novel, 4 WL novels), 3 manga, & a number of short stories.  No experience is exactly like the others. It seems illogical that this is so. There are overlaps, of course.  For me, these are

*multiple narrators
*folklore of some sort
*non-linear writing process.

Tonight, I admitted aloud that the 6th novel--Graveminder--is not writing for me in my familiar non-linear way. It still has multiple narrators & folklore, but my non-linear process was upended for this one. It's a peculiar feeling.

I have, of course, expanded between chapters already written, but that's simply part of the drafting process. It's not odd. 

What is odd--to me, at least--is the fact that I'm seemingly cursed to need to write the freaking chapters in order.  I had to finish Chapter -- before I could go on.  I know events that will follow later, but writing them out of order is not working. It's unnatural in feeling.

OTOH, it's working, so I'm not bitching . . . I am puzzling over it though.

In other Graveminder corners, I also admitted tonight that I'm not at all sure what genre the book is rightfully going to be classified as. It's folklore based, of course, so I guess we can call it a fantasy. It also has a bit of violence, some monstrosity, some corpses, & a bit of darkness that might make it properly a horror novel by some definitions.  I've trusted two readers to read it. The first said, "I expected it to be a romance. It's not." The second reader said, "I didn't know it was a mystery with a romance."  Umm. I don't know what it is either. I'm going with "book" bc that is pretty much the best answer I've got. ;)

Once upon a time, when I wrote the first book, I thought I had a plan, a grasp of how MY process worked.  For that first book, which was a MG fantasy, I had an outline. I had a board with colour-coded post-it notes.  It was all very orderly.

Then I wrote Wicked Lovely. For it, I had no outline, but I did have a short story that was the basis for the novel. I switched narrators throughout the process, & I didn't write it in order.

Then I wrote a second novel--which turned out to really be two novels tangled together. I ripped a big chunk out (about 30k) which ended up being the core of one of the narrators' part of 3rd WL novel. Then I wrote the 2nd WL novel (Ink Exchange). Then I went back & finished the 30k story that began the 3rd novel (Fragile Eternity).

By then, I thought I had a better grasp on what I was doing. I'd figured out better focus, and the 4th WL novel (Radiant Shadows) wasreally a concise story, not two novels tangled together. I still had multiple narrators; it still wrote in a non-linear way.  A-ha! I have figured it out. I have a system. I have figured out How I Write.

. . . except I didn't.

Graveminder
isn't unrolling at all like any of the books thus far. . . which, yanno, didn't unroll like each other either so why this surprises me, I don't know. It does though.

< /pondering >

Back to my oddly linear experience . . .

Comments

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[info]swan_tower wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 05:45 am (UTC)
Oh GOD do I know what you mean. A Star Shall Fall hasn't come out at all like my previous novels -- and with ten data points prior to it, I really did think I'd figured out How I Write. Maybe I have, but that doesn't mean books that break the pattern aren't going to happen.

My own How I Write appears to be the opposite of yours, as making myself write linearly turned out to be the key to actually finishing a novel. Star went linearly, too -- that wasn't the change -- but I wrote a much crappier first draft than I'm accustomed to doing, and have had to wholesale replace scene after scene. (Which produces some serious stress, when you set your deadline based on your usual process of clean first drafts.)

It's a hairy experience, having things go not as expected.
[info]melissa_writing wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 06:09 am (UTC)
It IS, isn't it? I had a panicky moment when I started wondering if by changing the process in such a way, the book would suck horribly and/or fail to reach completion or . . . any number of panicky thoughts. Then, I got lost in the story again & felt better.

. . . at least for tonight. We'll see where I am tomorrow.

Are you approaching a deadline now? Or are you at a completed text?
[info]swan_tower wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 06:58 am (UTC)
Finished the draft about a month ago; now I'm revising. But I had to work double- to triple-time for a little while to make sure I'd meet my deadline with a book I'd feel okay about. (I could have chilled out more if I weren't traveling for half this month -- otherwise I could have had a rougher draft at the end of September, because I'd have had all October to revise.)
(Anonymous) wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 11:02 am (UTC)
Wicked Lovely
Currently I am living abroad with my family and I just discovered your book, "Wicked Lovely" in a favourite english bookshop. Loved it and decided to check out your livejournal site. I am very impressed at the relationship you show with your reading fans - well done! I wish you further success!
[info]patesden wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 12:45 pm (UTC)
Linda Urban's had a series of wonderful posts on form and challenge in writing. Her post (Oct 1) about the spine of the story made me step back and think about why my WIP wants to be written in a certain way and form. Writing never fails to amaze me.

http://lurban.livejournal.com/




[info]catephoenix wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 05:12 pm (UTC)
I ache for a non-linear process, but for me, it's always been a case of writing the chapters in the order they appear.
[info]mairijeaan wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
That's the joy and wonder of being anything worth being, a writer or a mother or a lover: just when it seems to be all set, it changes. It's maddening and wonderful, and at the very least exciting. You seem to be doing fabulously with the challenge :)
(Anonymous) wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 10:03 pm (UTC)
the chapters
I have the same.....idk if you'd call it a problem....but ya i can't write the next chapter without doing the one before it! :) i think its just because im a bit of a perfectionist.... :P
[info]tracy_d74 wrote:
Oct. 10th, 2009 04:50 pm (UTC)
I find that I have a scene swollen with intense dialogue (the conversation that sets things in a different direction) that repeats in my mind until I write it down. Then I build the story leading up to that scene and then what happens after the scene. Typically, the points that follow after that scene spill out of me. I can write a ROUGH chapter outline, more like a note of what needs to happen and whose POV will carry the chapter. The chapters before . . . well, it's like wading through molasses. I have to build the tension to that scene, make the reader want the release and feel the pain, the frustration. Like and hate it at the same time. I guess I do it ok because so far my beta readers always love and hate the pivotal scene in the book. For me the anguish in writing is when I the 'great' scene comes to me--3 am. I long for a 3 pm moment of inspiration. But nope, my creativity is allergic to 3 pm.
[info]kellykrill wrote:
Oct. 11th, 2009 04:16 am (UTC)
Hang on there a sec.
"Tonight, I admitted aloud that the 6th novel--Graveminder--is not writing for me in my familiar non-linear way. It still has multiple narrators & folklore, but my non-linear process was upended for this one. It's a peculiar feeling."

Whoa, whoa, whoa. Wait a minute. Don't you mean to say the 5th novel?? Because if you really mean 6th novel...then what the heck is the title for the 5th book?
[info]melissa_writing wrote:
Oct. 11th, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
Re: Hang on there a sec.
No, I do mean the 6th novel :) I have written 5.

1. Unpubbed middle-grade faery novel (won't be published)
2. Wicked Lovely
3. Ink Exchange
4. Fragile Eternity
5. Radiant Shadows
6. Graveminder (in progress, not faeries)
7. WL book 5 (in progress, has no title)

I call GM the 6th bc it was started before WL5 AND bc it'll release before WL5.
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